Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts

Thursday, September 29, 2016

Week 6: Storytelling - We Shall Pass

"Lark has been gone for way too long, Gregor. We have to get the bridge built to Lanka or we will never get Sarah back! Is that what you want? Do you want her to sit there and rot?" Penny-Nichole was pacing quickly on the stones in front of their tent. Not long after the three had made it to Vedos, Rava had come and attacked and stolen Sarah from them. He claimed it was revenge for his brother, Kellan, whom they had destroyed just before making it to the planet they were currently occupying.

"How did he even find us on this planet? We went alone! There is no way, out of all of the ships, that he could have singled just us out. And why just us? What did we do to him, it was a group effort to kill his horrid brother!" Gregor stood and grasped Penny-Nichole by the arm. She spun furiously around and glared at him.

"Penny-Nichole, now is the time to be calm. I know this land and I know what we must do to have the bridge built. But we can't go until tomorrow so for now, sit, be still, and breathe. Let me tell you a story of the last time Sarah and I visited this planet." Penny-Nichole firmly pulled her arm from Gregor's grasp but she did also take a deep breath to calm herself and plopped cross legged on the ground. Gregor smirked and settled down onto his makeshift seat.

"This is the planet Mauku. A planet that is filled with things that our people consider to be magical and mystical but are perfectly normal to the Maukuns. There are clans of shape-shifting cat people and jackals and wolves, there are monkey-men, there are demons and goblins, there are creatures of such power that all across this planet they are considered to be deities, as you have seen with some of our adventures here already. One such god-like creature here on Mauku, considered to be a god of seas and oceans, holds the power to create a bridge for us. Tomorrow we will journey there to pray to him and ask for his assistance but we must be gentle about it. We don't know all of the practices of the people here and we don't want to offend the balance of this world." Gregor continued to tell Penny-Nichole stories of his adventures with the clan of Leonum and the fierce battles he had been through. Over time Penny-Nichole relaxed entirely and began to enjoy the stories. After hunting for dinner and one last run through of the plan, Gregor and Penny-Nichole settled down for bed.

Morning came and Penny-Nichole sprang from her bed.

"Pops, come on, Pops, we need to leave. Come on, old man! It's time to go! We have to save Sarah!" Gregor grumbled his way up and soon the two left.

It wasn't a long journey to the ocean deity. It took exceptionally less time than it should have mostly because Penny-Nichole walked like a cheetah ran and cut their travel time in half.

"Let me do the talking. I would like for you to stand guard." Penny-Nichole nodded and stood back as Gregor sat by the edge of a large crystal clear lake. He folded his hands together and began mumbling under his breath. This continued for what seemed like several hours until Gregor let out a heavy sigh and stood.

"There seems to be no answer... I wonder if there is something else I should be doing." Gregor scratched his head and took an old book out of his satchel and flipped through it.

Penny-Nichole let loose a fearsome growl and walked to where Gregor had just been sitting. She looked out over the water and called,  "We will not be ignored. Not at a time like this. Water god, can you hear me? My name is Penny-Nichole of Earth and we have come to seek your aid! We have gifts from several other gods of your world as well as other worlds. Do not dare to ignore us or you shall feel my wrath!" Penny-Nichole bellowed out over the water. However, while the waters trembled in fear of her anger, the water god still did not respond.

"Alrighty then. I guess we are doing this the hard way." Penny-Nichole reached behind her and, out of thin air, pulled a slim, gleaming bow. A matching quiver with wicked-looking arrows formed around her torso. She pulled an arrow and nocked it to her bow. "Last chance!" she called to whatever was listening. After waiting a long moment she released her mighty arrows into the water. Gregor thought to stop her, but he didn't know any other way to get the water god's attention, so he stood back and simply observed.

After releasing about twenty arrows at the lake and watching them disappear into the darkness, a great being rose from the water and hovered in front of Penny-Nichole, "My young child, I have heard your cries and I have felt your arrows fly through my kingdom." The being lifted his hand and the water beside him rumbled eerily. Penny-Nichole nocked another arrow and aimed it at the being while Gregor ran to her side with his sword at the ready. The being chuckled and grasped the scepter that had risen from the water. Grasping it longways so that it was parallel to the surface of the lake, the being held the scepter out to Penny-Nichole.

"Take hold of this with me, small one. I will assist you in building the bridge to Lanka to find your beloved friend." Penny-Nichole stood there for a moment longer before putting the arrow back in her quiver and, just as the bow and quiver appeared, the weapons disappeared from her body. She walked forward and grasped the scepter. The being smiled, lifted its head and spoke a few words before a beam of light shot from the scepter, forming a great bridge to Lanka. The light blinded Penny-Nichole and Gregor so they didn't see it leave but when they opened their eyes the great being was gone.

Author's note:
This story is based off of the story "The Bridge" from the Ramayana. The original story is very short. Basically Rama tries to give sacrifices to the king of the ocean but gets no response so he gets pissed and starts shooting arrows into the water. The king of the ocean appears and is very kind and gentle to Rama and helps him create the bridge. Really he calms the waters so that the monkey army (that I accidentally forgot to add) can create the bridge. It was the most logical next step after my last story and I really feel like it does the best job of showing Penny-Nichole and Gregor and even Sarah a little as the different parts of Rama. Penny-Nichole is the fierce warrior side and Gregor is the curious and wise and experienced side of Rama. Sarah is supposed to represent Rama's. It was easy to do this story but it was also a lot of fun. I really can't wait to unleash Penny-Nichole's kickass skills when they actually make it to Rava (who is clearly Ravana). I realize they don't have the giant army that Rama did, but I can create that later.

If you would like to read a little more about some of Gregor and Sarah Strike's adventures you can go to my old storybook here: Planet of the Cats
If you want to read even MORE of their exciting adventures, here is my old blog: Old Myth & Folklore blog

Bibliography: The Bridge by Donald A. Mackenzie

Kind of the bow I imagined Penny-Nichole using.
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Tuesday, September 27, 2016

Week 6: Reading Notes - Part D

THIS IS NOT COMPLETE. Obviously. I just accidentally hit publish instead of saving it as a draft.

1. Bhisma Falls
So wait... Arjuna was actually born a girl?? I am so confused...
Donald A. Mackenzie
2. Drona in Command
Romesh C. Dutt
3. Abhimanyu and Jayadratha
I can only imagine the pain of losing a child. I am not surprised that Arjuna wants revenge.
Donald A. Mackenzie
4. Ghatotkacha
This story and the last are both about two of the Pandavas losing their children. I feel like this, and possibly the last story, would be good to use for my storytellings.
Donald A. Mackenzie
5. Death of Drona
The trickery used here and the image of the kuru's soul is pretty cool. I feel like this could also be a good story to use for my storytelling.
Sister Nivedita
6. Bhima and Duhshasana
As gross as it is that he drank the guy's blood, I am impressed that he kept his vow and it makes me happy that he avenged the wrong done to Draupadi.
Donald A Mackenzie
7. Arjuna and Karna
I would really like to use this story as another one of my storytelling stories.
Donald A. Mackenzie
8. Duryodhana in the Lake
Donald A. Mackenzie
9. The Raid
This would be an excellent story to use since it is not what one would expect to happen at all! The gods seemed to always help the Pandavas but then shiva just let the guy in!
Donald A. Mackenzie & Romesh Dutt
10. Ashwatthaman's Jewel
So I could also use Ashwatthaman as one of my celestial beings. I want to use the story of his amulet somehow.
Donald A. Mackenzie
11. Mourning
As sad and painful as this story would be, I can completely see a retelling of this story to be super useful in my portfolio.
Donald A. Mackenzie
12. The Pandavas and Bhishma
The idea of being able to chose the moment of ones death is a SUPER cool idea! I feel like it could be easy to misuse, but it could also create an excellent was to forward a plot.
John Mandeville Macfie
13.  Parikshit
John Mandeville Macfie and Sunity Devee
14. King Yudhishthira's Horse
This ritual is still fascinating to me.
Donald A. Mackenzie
15. Horse Sacrifice
Its about damn time.
Donald A. Mackenzie
16. The Mongoose
I like the idea of switching narrators and having the actual narrator be an animal!
Annie Besant
17. The Forest and its Ghosts
This would be a really cool story as well.
Donald A. Mackenzie
18. Death of Krishna
This reads like a Shakespearian tragedy where EVERYONE dies at the end...
Donald A. Mackenzie
19. The Pandavas Depart
Donald A. Mackenzie
20. The Afterlife
I LOVE the idea of him going through a test and, after succeeding, becoming a celestial. I also really like how it is explained how each brother is basically paired with another god.
Donald A. Mackenzie
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Bibliography: Since each chapter is written by a different author each author, link and title are provided above.

Week 6: Reading Notes - Part C

Reading Notes Part C
1. Life in the Forest
This chapter reminds me of the story of Sugriva I think it was? Where he was told that his kingdom would be restored to him, probably after he met Rama, because that was the theme to all things in tha epic. I like the idea of having an all powerful diety that wont necessarily spek for itsself, but will send messangers for it.
Donald A. Mackenzie
2. Krishna's Visit
The seeds of deception are planted early in this story it looks like.
Donald A. Mackenzie
3. Arjuna and Shiva
I like that even though Arjuna is incredibly devout, he cannot fight his warrior instinct. I also like the imagery of his devotions. I would really like to use Gandiva, the divine bow, in one of my stories.
Sister Nivedita
4. Arjuna and Indra
Indra - King of Gods, Varuna - God of Waters, Yama - King of the Dead, Kubera - Lord of Treasures, Swarga - the celestial city, Apsaras - heavenly brides of gods and heros, Kama - God of Love, Daityas and Danavas - demons and giants, the ancient enemies of Indra. The image of Arjuna fighting the giants and demons is really cool. He basically parts the ocean and then calls forth his celestial weapons and kicks their butts.
Donald A. Mackenzie
5. The Himalayas
What is the Deluge?
Donald A. Mackenzie
6. Bhima and Hanuman
Okay, so I need to remember that Bhima is also a son of the wind god Vayu. I'm so excited that Hanuman is back! He was one of my favorite characters in the Ramayana. The story of bascially how the religion came to be was very interesting.
John Mandeville Macfie
7. Duryodhana and the Gandharvas
Donald A. Mackenzie
8. Karna and Indra
Based on this chapter I am very interested to see what happens should Karna and Arjuna ever get into a battle.
Sister Nivedita
9. Jayadratha and Draupadi
These men need to stop leaving their women in the forests alone...
Donald A. Mackenzie
10. Riddles a the Lake
This would be a good chapter to get some ideas from if my characters ever needed some riddles to deal with! Which I think is a good stepping stone in stories.
Donald A. Mackenzie
11. The Court of the King Virata
I guess it is a good fit for Arjuna to become the dance teacher since he became so skilled in it at the celestial city.
Donald A. Mackenzie
12. Bhima and Kichaka
I don't understand why her husbands cannpt depend her. Or why they have to do so in secret.
C. A. Kincaid
13. The Cattle Raid
I bet having to fight those brothers would be a surprise.
Donald A. Mackenzie
14. Preparations for War
War is going to happen no matter how hard even the gods try to stop it. I like it. :)
Donald A. Mackenie
15. Krishna and His Army
I love the relationship between Krishna and Arjuna. I think it is so cool and I would love to use it in some stories.
Annie Besant
16. Krishna's Mission to the Kauravas
This isn't even my final form is the only thing I keep thinking with this entire chapter. But I like the idea of it.
Donald A. Mackenzie
17. Krishna and Karna
That has to be an awful intense reaction to learning that your lifelong enemies are actually your brothers.
Donald A. Mackenzie
18. The Armies at Kurukshetra
Donald A. Mackenzie
19. Bhagavad - Gita
As much as I love battle scenes, I am more interested in the celestial character from these stories.
Edwin Arnold
20. The Battle Begins
This will be a pretty epic fight.
Donald A. Mackenzie

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Bibliography: Since each chapter is written by a different author each link, author, and titles are given at the top of the page.