"We are in the forest of the Vanars. We are looking for a very powerful Vanar to see if he will help us in the upcoming war." Sarah informed the girl. Penny-Nichole seemed content with the answer.
"Shh, shush ladies. Here comes a vanar now." Gregor slowed their walk to a crawl as a creaky old man made his way up to the three.
"Good morning three travelers, where are you off to on this fine fine day where the sun surely shines bright up in the great sky up above us?" The vanar chattered on to them about many things before the three were able to speak.
"We are Gregor and Sarah Strike and Penny-Nichole. We have come looking for Vedos, do you think you could take us to him?" Gregor spoke calmly to the creature and the more he spoke, the more the creature's face lit up. Once Gregor was finished the vanar jumped in to the air with great ease. His rags fell away and turned into beautiful garments of turquoise and rich purples and when he landed, the old vanar was no longer there. In his place stood a tall, lean man with the face and tail of a monkey.
"I am Lark, close friend to our leader, Vedos, and son of the wind lord Mayu. My people and I have been waiting for many days and many nights for you all to arrive to us and seek out Vedos! We know of your story and have a story of our own that we seek your assistance with as well. Like you, our great ruler has lost one he loves dearly and he, like you, has been cast from his home." Penny-Nichole perked up as the vanar spoke. She wasn't sure what he meant when he spoke of being exiled. She had joined the Strikes on her own terms but she had never heard anything about the Strikes not being able to return home.
The four walked along the winding road and spoke of many things. Well, mostly Lark chattered endlessly to the three about the story of their leader as well as his own lineage.
Authors note: I know this story is short and seemingly meaningless, but I was running very short on time and I felt that it was a good transitional story to introduce some new characters and some new plots. This story is based off of Sugriva and Hanuman. I still have my three bounty hunters as Rama, I am missing the Lakshmana character, but Lark is supposed to be Hanuman and Vedos is representing Sugriva. I tried to provide some recap between the last story and now that went along with the actual story as well.

Bibliography:
Sugriva and Hanuman, written by Geraldine Hodgson
Hi Sage! I'm glad that I'm getting to read some more of your stories! I really like how you've kept the characters the same throughout your stories. As I previously mentioned, the space feel is super cool to read about and I think it modernizes the ancient epics we are reading for class! Well done once again!
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ReplyDeleteI'm reading your stories in reverse, here, so I'll have to amend my comment on your retelling of "The Bridge". It seems you've already brought Hanuman (and Sugreeva!) into the story. As you yourself have already noted, this story is a short one. I'm glad you were able to introduce us to some of the epic's major characters, but I'm dying to hear your take on the Sugreeva/Vali episode! Will your three bounty hunters act any differently than Rama did, or will they too kill Vali from the shadows? A few extra paragraphs on this episode could also help you set up the big army your bounty hunters will need to save Sarah by the end of it all; after all, Sugreeva is the one who supplied Rama with warriors in the original epic. Perhaps you can flash back to this scene in a future story, if you need to make use of it again, using the reappearance of Lark or Vados as a sort of trigger. Anyway, thanks for the story!
This looks like an exciting new adventure! I love that this creature is so interesting looking. You have to have a pretty awesome imagination to come up with these things! I also like that he's so excited and chatty! Sounds like me really. I don't know a stranger. I like that you hinted that their may be something Penny-Nichole doesn't know about the Strikes. Maybe they were banished from home?
ReplyDeleteHey Sage! What an inventive story! This is a great way to introduce us to these characters and set up the coming adventure that they'll be going on. I really liked how you incorporated the plot and characters into a new and exciting setting. The idea of this plot in space is a fresh twist on this old tale! Great job!
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